Sunday, August 8, 2010

Pain by Sean Johnson

Prickly like a porcupine
And hard as a steel door
I feel like a wrecked car
No quick fix to stop the pain
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  1. trumanne guerinAugust 8, 2010 at 10:37 AM

    wow Sean I feel like i am in pain after reading this poem. Good use of similes. you created a vivid picture. (teacher's comment)

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