I am as gentle as a lamb and as quiet as a mouse I wonder about my school days I hear a boy whistling like a bird I see a dress as bright as the sun I want to be rich I am as gentle as a lamb and as quiet as a mouse
I like the poem. You are as quiet as a mouse? I know the really make little noise so the idea of quietness is there but I don't think you are really quiet. lol (peer comment)
You started off quite well Abigail but I know from the handout I gave there are some verses missing. Looking forward to the rest of the poem. (teacher's comment)
I like the poem. You are as quiet as a mouse? I know the really make little noise so the idea of quietness is there but I don't think you are really quiet. lol (peer comment)
ReplyDeleteYou started off quite well Abigail but I know from the handout I gave there are some verses missing. Looking forward to the rest of the poem.
ReplyDelete(teacher's comment)